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IT'S TEA TIME YEAH
So, like. It's another pic.
And this creature still has no name. I am disappoint.
COMMENTS, CRITIQUE AND TIPS ARE LOVED OH, SO MUCH
TAKE THIS PICTURE AND I WILL PERSONALLY SHOW YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU. REALLY.
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I popped over here since you mentioned wanting critique over on ED-teaparty (I think... it was one of those groups). I don't use DA's critique feature because I don't think it's very helpful. 
On your work that seems serious like this, there isn't a whole lot to critique because it looks like you have a really solid style going for you. There's only a couple suggestions I have, and they're small.
Maybe try a little more variation in your line weight? I already see you doing that a little bit but I think it could be pushed a little more since this style seems to mostly be about the line work.
I'd watch for tangents causing visual tension in some places. You have a few here that I notice pretty quickly:
Where the girl's skirt meets the corner of the table cloth. The line of the petticoat, the top of the skirt, and the side of the table cloth all converge in one place and it causes tension that is a little distracting.
The fold in her skirt is aligning with the middle chair leg, making it look like the chair leg is veering off to the left.
The very right tip of her petticoat is converging with the far right chair leg as well.
The right tip of her hair bow is tangenting with the top of her hair.
The creature's left leg with the other side of the tablecloth, because it looks like it flows into the upward slant of the table cloth trim.
Just making sure elements like that clearly overlap with no lines intersecting fixes that issue completely, and it really is just a quibble. Otherwise, I really like this.
On your work that seems serious like this, there isn't a whole lot to critique because it looks like you have a really solid style going for you. There's only a couple suggestions I have, and they're small.
Maybe try a little more variation in your line weight? I already see you doing that a little bit but I think it could be pushed a little more since this style seems to mostly be about the line work.
I'd watch for tangents causing visual tension in some places. You have a few here that I notice pretty quickly:
Where the girl's skirt meets the corner of the table cloth. The line of the petticoat, the top of the skirt, and the side of the table cloth all converge in one place and it causes tension that is a little distracting. The fold in her skirt is aligning with the middle chair leg, making it look like the chair leg is veering off to the left.The very right tip of her petticoat is converging with the far right chair leg as well.The right tip of her hair bow is tangenting with the top of her hair.The creature's left leg with the other side of the tablecloth, because it looks like it flows into the upward slant of the table cloth trim. Just making sure elements like that clearly overlap with no lines intersecting fixes that issue completely, and it really is just a quibble. Otherwise, I really like this.